Jan Stirm                                                       Office Hours: MW 11-12, TR 3:15-4

English 357 Shakespeare                             Office: Hibbard 404; phone 715-836-3016

Spring 2000; W 6-8:45 PM HHH307                Email: JStirm@uwec.edu

Goals and Philosophy: We read Shakespeare for a lot of reasons, and in a lot of ways.  My goals for you in this class are to 1) gain familiarity with and knowledge of a number of Shakespearean texts, 2) learn about the historical contexts for those texts and the conditions of their production, 3) foster a basic understanding of the ways academics approach Shakespeare and other literature so that you can approach new texts on your own and use what you’ve learned in this class in other classes or elsewhere.

 

Reading and Notes:  We'll be doing a ton of reading; I usually figure about 3 hours of outside work per hour of in-class work, but your time will probably vary.  You must keep up with the reading, attend class regularly and participate in discussions.  You should also plan on seeing me in office hours to discuss your questions and writing assignments.   You should take reading notes for every text we read, and you should read the introductory material for each play.  Try to read where you have ready access to a decent dictionary; when you run across a word you don't know (and which isn't glossed in the text), look it up and write a short definition in the margin next to the word.  As I read, I make short notes about things that interest me, including the page (or line numbers); I usually write down plot bits, moments of repetition, and passages which seem important, as well as things I really just like.  When I finish a scene or act, I write a short summary of the material, including a list of characters with some identifying notes, the plot or argument, and any special action I think is important.  I also make a special point of writing questions I have about the work.   This goes double when I read theory or criticism.

 

Class Attendance and Contribution:  Absolutely required.  Make sure you come to every class with your reading notes and questions.  You will need to finish the assigned reading by the day we begin discussion in class.  Because this class meets only once a week, if you miss more than one class, your grade will be adversely affected!

 

Assignments:  a performance project and mini-paper, weekly reading quizzes, a midterm, and a final exam.  You will also choose one of two options for your more formal essay assignments, either two five (5) page papers (see assignments below) or one ten (10) page paper (from a research project you develop in consultation with me).

 

 


Quizzes: Basic quizzes on the readings (Shakespeare, McDonald, theory/criticism).  You should be able to remember plot points, character names, main points of arguments, important definitions, and so forth.  All quizzes are closed book, open notes.

 

Mini-Paper: Write a 2-3 page response to your work on the performance project.  You MUST quote from the performance project script and/or the readings in McDonald.  The goals: you should demonstrate your ability to analyze your experience and to use quotations to support your points.  I should get a sense of your writing skills.  You should get a sense of my grading and expectations.  (Due 1/28)

 

Option 1: two 5 page papers (Due 2/16 and 5/10)

Option 2: one 10-12 page paper (abstract due 3/15, final due 5/3)

 

More information about the formal essays:

As with any other essays you write for an English class, these need to have strong thesis statements and to make an argument.  You will, of course, cite the source of all quotations and information in your paper.  You should use the MLA style for citations, which you can find in your Heath Handbook (or any other handbook you have), the MLA Style manual, or on line at:  http://www.columbia.edu/cu/cup/cgos/idx_basic.html     Remember, proofreading and grammar are an important part of your communication with your reader!

 

You will choose by October 5 whether you want to do two short papers or one longer paper.  I will not accept late papers (unless there’s some HUGE emergency), so keep that in mind.

 

Option 1, Paper #1: Due Wednesday 2/16  

 

Write an explication which focuses on one of the following passages and explain why the passage is significant in view of themes or problems we’ve been discussing in class.  Your essay should be about 5 pages long, typed (or word-processed), double-spaced, with reasonable margins (about 1" all around), and stapled together.  Put your name, my name and the class number on the back side of the last page only.

 

All from 1 Henry IV:    1.1.1-30;      2.3.37-64;     3.1.34-48;     3.1.145-162;     5.4.111-129

 

Here are some questions to keep in mind as you work: how does the passage help you understand aspects of the world the work represents?  How does the language (images, allusions, rhetorical devices, etc.) compare or contrast with other moments in the work (or other passage)?  What sense do you make of the fact that the passage occurs where it does in the unfolding of the action or argument?   These questions are not intended as the outline for your essay; I offer them as initial guides to help you situate the passage in the argument of the work.  As you write the essay, remember that your particular reading of the passage(s) will be stronger and more persuasive if you call attention to details from the passage that illustrate the claims you make.  I will be happy to talk with you about your paper as you start working on it.

Suggestions for Option 1, Paper #1:

(1) Do not use outside sources on this paper.  Most of the time I'm open-minded as long as you cite your source, but this time think things through yourself.  Of course, you should definitely look up any words you don't know! 

(2) Your thesis should make a claim or argument about the passage.  Your thesis may relate to the passages theme, but it is not a restatement or paraphrase.

(3) Look up in a dictionary all words you don't know.

Option 1, Paper #2: Due 3/15

Choose one of the following topics and write a paper in response to it.  You must cite all sources you use in writing this paper, including the play.

1)  Edition  (This is probably the most difficult of the assignments!)  When we go to a performance of Shakespeare, we almost always see a cut play; that is, during production some lines or parts were cut or condensed for a variety of reasons.  It may surprise you to realize how much a play may be cut and still retain some meaningful flow.  Prepare a 500 line edition of one of the plays we are studying this quarter and turn it in along with a 5 page paper discussing some aspect of your work on the edition.  Some suggestions:  Buy a really cheap copy of the play (or make a photocopy from your Riverside) and mark the 500 lines with highlighter rather than typing out 500 lines!  You must retain something from every scene in the play, but you can eliminate characters.  You need not maintain the integrity of individual speeches, but should attempt to retain a sense of flow through your chosen lines.  Start by reading the play through, then decide what aspect of the plot you want to emphasize in your edition.  Work through the play choosing lines that seem vital (some students find it helpful to work through the play backwards).  For your 5 page paper, you might want to discuss how you chose what to emphasize, why you eliminated or kept certain characters, or what you learned about the play from this project.

2) Edition Review    Choose a recent (since 1990 or so) individual edition of one of the plays we’ve read (or will read) and write a review of it.  You will want to consider the audience the edition’s aimed at and how well it serves that audience, the choices the editor made and how well s/he explains those choices, and how well designed the edition is.  You might find it helpful to look at Which Shakespeare? to get an idea of how to write a review of an edition; Shakespeare Quarterly also reviews editions periodically, and one of those might prove useful as a model. 

3) Book Review     Choose a recent (since 1990 or so) book of criticism of Shakespeare and write a well-considered, fair review of it.  You will find it very helpful to read the book more than once, and to look at book reviews in Shakespeare Quarterly or Studies in English Literature in order to have models for your work.   (You should check with me to find an appropriate book to review.)

Option 2 (Abstract due 3/15; Final Draft 5/3)

 

My expectations: I expect a 10-12 page paper on a topic related to one of the Shakespearean works we’ve read this term.  Your paper should have an argument with a strong thesis, well-supported by evidence from the work (in the form of quotations!).  As far as your essay’s format, I expect standard, one-inch margins, a readable and reasonably-sized font (10 or 12 pitch); please do not use a cover sheet or folder.  Instead, put the title of your essay on the top of the first page, drop a few lines and start in.  Put your name and the date on the back of the last page and simply staple all your pages together at the upper left corner.

You may choose to do outside reading as part of your preparation for writing this paper; if so, you should read at least recent 3 articles (or books) by different critics (by recent, I mean published within the last 15 years--NOT republished within the last 15 years).  You may find it useful to look at older materials, but should be cautious in adopting their assumptions.  Please also remember that the fact that something is in print does not mean that it is “right” or smart or whatever! 

I will hand out a sample abstract as the time approaches.  IF you’re using outside reading for the paper, you should provide an annotated bibliography along with your abstract.  Your abstract should also be attached to the final draft of your paper.

Potential Suggested Topics for Option 2    (I prefer you find your own, but just in case):

1) Often our discussion of plays focus primarily on major scenes or characters, usually because we’re up against time.  But had we world enough and time, we might find that some seemingly insignificant scenes or characters are actually vital to a play’s meaning(s).

 

--Analyze how one of the following scenes functions within the play.  Consider one of the following scenes: Titus Andronicus 4.3, King Lear 1.3 or 1.5 (or others).

  --Analyze how one of the following characters functions within his/her play: Oswald (King Lear), Seyton, Ross, or Young Siward (Macbeth) (or others).

  --Sometimes, even people mentioned who don’t appear as characters can be fascinating; consider, for example, King Edward (Macbeth), Sycorax (The Tempest) (or others).

  Suggested starting points for reading: M.M. Mahood’s Bit Parts in Shakespeare’s Plays or Mark Rose’s Shakespearean Design.

  2) In Orientalism, Edward Said suggests that European fascination with the “Oriental” other, including peoples from the Middle East, Africa and Asia (here we might include indigenous peoples of the Americas as well) stems from a desire to understand the self through controlling, especially with knowledge, the other.  Said’s work suggests that we should look at non-Europeans in European works of art and literature in order to understand not the non-Europeans, but how Europeans are constructing themselves in relation to the other.  Analyze how Titus Andronicus, or The Tempest construct whiteness.  If you’re feeling really ambitious, you might want to compare constructions of whiteness in both of these plays to see if there’s a major change (and consider if this change is related to chronology, genre, or something else).

  3) Analyze the relationship between two characters in a play (check them out with me).  What happens to the relationship within the play?  Is there a change?  Why / why not? 

  4) Mediated information, in the form of letters and/or messengers, comes into almost every play we’ve read at some point.  Analyze and discuss the function of mediation in one of the texts we’ve read.  You might want to consider how information is interpreted as well as how it is transmitted.  Does the movement of information change during the play or poem?  Are there “unreliable narrators”?  (How do you know?)

  5) Geography and geographical movement play a large role in many of Shakespeare’s plays.  Choose one play and discuss how geography or geographical movement function within that play; you may want to limit your discussion to one movement or place.  Further, you may want to consider geography metatheatrically for a given play.  (You might want to start with Steven Mullaney’s The Place of the Stage) or Gillies’ Shakespeare and the Geography of Difference.

 

 

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